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bird/stars aug2026

watching stars
fly like birds
above my head
a bird shoots
like a star

i feel like this could do with some tweaking. if i think of a bird that ends in -oot or -ar, that would be nice so its symmetric rhyming (ish lmao). also the 3rd line has 4 syllables :( i could do "above me" but its not as good. maybe over could do (its 2 syllables but feels shorter)

this actually happened to me lol i was lying in a field to watch the perseids and a bird flew like 2m above my head or smth

making those little poems is fun! i like doing em really short cuz its maybe easier and i like it. i guess i can blame the short length if i cant do it right. also trying to condense a lot into that short space is nice. i should start expanding my vocabulary so i can find better rhymes n stuff.